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Promptly Poetry
#1082503 added January 18, 2025 at 6:37am
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Unbalanced
In a silent Zen grotto
Overlooking mirrored waters
I sit surrounded by peace
Yet my mind is ill at ease.
Green new growth
Brown mother earth—
My heart full of unrest
Can't shake what festers
Within.

Wherever I go, I'm still myself.
Problems drain me,
Gnawing away
Night and day:
Why did I do that?
Who can I trust?
Is sorry enough?
Can I face them again?

If I could stay forever
In this quiet natural space
Perhaps I'd find
Some peace of mind
A balance of Zen
Without and within.


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