JOSE GERVIC LABE, JR.
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When The Sun Sets
This was actually my first attempt to write a novel. This was just a try and I hope you will like this. Though it's not yet done, but I would like to put this in here to gather and hear your comments. In somehow it would help me to improve this write. Some chapters were on my drafts and I will take time to encode them for you guys. I am sure there were grammatical errors in here and I badly need your help to correct them. Thanks and read on!The story goes in to this: The story of this lovers - Joseph and Martha wasn't new. It was started since their childhood days being together. Their feelings grew more and boomed as they walked through the chapters of their lives. They were together ever since, they shared those happy and sad moments together until the day they walk on the aisle towards binding themselves into marriage and to the rest of the days. They were the happiest couple the world could ever have. They lived in a promise that none could ever take them apart and had sworn to do their part until their last breath. Yet, all the sweetest days together have to end when a great tragedy came to their way. What lies ahead? Would they live happily ever after in the end of the day? Joseph found his family and so did Martha when they're apart. Would they sacrifice them to continue what long they've sworn? You'll see as the story goes.
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