(This message was edited by female_strangr on 05-16-05 @ 12:31 pm EDT)

Hey--
This is a work in progress and this is the first section. It's based on the song "Whiskey Lullaby" so if you've heard that you will know what I'm going for. I wanted to make sure this section was as good as I could get it before moving on. Please offer your opinion and maybe a few suggestions on were I could go with this, I've got the beginning and the end cemented but the middle's still all squishy.

Beneath Their Willow  (13+) It's based on the song Whiskey Lullaby. (Grammatical Revision in Process) #964141 by Female Stranger