The title seems to really fit your novel so I would leave that as is if you choose to that is...
I think you have lots of talent and it is interesting how you broke down the times like you did very creative.
You have away with words and you tell the story very well and I feel like I am in it which I love to feel when I am reading. You have a keen eye and mind for detail and that is an important key.
Write on!!
Thank you for sharing this with me, I am interested in seeing how your novel turns out
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