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Nov 23, 2005 at 5:15pm
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Re: Prompt 9- To My Liver
I wrote mine without reading this. Interesting how we both thought of 'liver and onions'! Does everyone?

I really like your use of alliteration. For rhythm's sake, I think 'suburban' is better than 'suburbanite' and would do as well.

Will you rework and make an item out of this ode? (I think it's an ode)

*Smile* Kåre
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Prompt 9- To My Liver · 11-16-05 11:05pm
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