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Nov 23, 2005 at 5:15pm
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I wrote mine without reading this. Interesting how we both thought of 'liver and onions'! Does everyone? I really like your use of alliteration. For rhythm's sake, I think 'suburban' is better than 'suburbanite' and would do as well. Will you rework and make an item out of this ode? (I think it's an ode) Kåre |