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Nov 30, 2005 at 2:56pm
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so nice to see such a beautiful poem on one of the most meaningful songs. "The sky is gray and white and cloudy, Sometimes I think it's hanging down on me. And it's a hitchhike a hundred miles. I'm a rag-a-muffin child." One suggestion, unless you did it on purpose: "Cloudy is the skies" has to be "cloudy are the skies." Very nice work. Sig by karjia96
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