If you have a moment, could you have a look the first four chapters of my novel that I'm editing to submit for publication?

Four Winds Of Heaven  (18+) A supernatural religious novel that explores the third secret of Fatima #1148674 by nancy777ca

If you could let me know what worked for you or what didn't and if you think content/ style wise it could somehow be improved.

Thank you
Nancy


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