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Oct 21, 2008 at 3:58pm
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Re: October 21st Done
It looks great. I'd buy almost all of it.

My only comment would be that the trial 'only lasting a few days' seems possibly short? I sat jury duty for a trial much less severe than 20 years in person (Intent to cause serious physical harm, i think) and that trial lasted three days just interviewing all the family. Deliberation was one afternoon.


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October 21st Done · 10-21-08 9:35am
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