Don't be hard on yourself! Never, EVER apologize for what you've written!

Very detailed, you even gave us measurements! Don't sweat it. You did fine.

I, myself? I couldn't quite get a grip on what it looked like, maybe I got too distracted with all those words! A little jumbled up, but you put a lot into it, and I can see that. Write on!

EDIT: Oh, and it might have to be ASR simply because it says "sexual assault division". Mods, let me know if I'm wrong.