I found the sketch tough, with my limited ability to do it 'from my head'. Yet again, it helped to make the words go down after I visualised the setting. Thanks for teaching us this trick!

I just need to do the third draft outline for this week and then I can stop worrying about the blasted 'puter crashing again. I am glad I have it backed up on site, I lost all the data in the computer the last time.

I am sure the story is veering of track a bit, yet it needs to that before it can get back into the straight. Writing out the characters attributes, even though these were real-life ones, makes them more three-dimensional for the write. I am learning so much.

Jyo

Contest Entry: "Physical Sketch - Setting #2, Mumbai's trains."