I proofread her story before she posted it. She is an English major or Literature major in college. I have bragged about Winnie Kay and sung her praises. Winnie's Comma Sense Class on the site really helped me with my comma placement, so I was able to help luminous1 with her punctuation. Luminous1 is a smart girl. I have urged her to post her second story, which she wrote recently. It is quite well written. She is working on a novel about a robot world. I have discussed it with her. I can't wait to see what she does with it this summer when school is out.

GoldenAutumn