<< Previous • Message List • Next >>
Oct 8, 2012 at 5:19am
#2445331
Oh, thank you, Mr. Jed. ![]() ![]() Yes, I'm getting better with the openings of my chapters, weave the settings into the action / dialogue / etc. more. The ill quality of the grammar not only comes from me sucking at it ![]() ![]() Yup, au contraire is right. ![]() Concerning the "laser gazes" ... it's our great, cliched minds are thinking alike! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
MESSAGE THREAD

by Olivia



by Elle



by Olivia

