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Oct 11, 2012 at 10:05am
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Re: DAY 25 ~ Can somebody ...
by Robin Author IconMail Icon
Olivia,

I think this is beautifully done. While I've been very fortunate and never had to explain anything like this to a 3 year old, I do know lots of kids that age.

You've captured the innocence and simplicity of childhood without making her sound too babyish. I especially like the ending when Mila realizes that the angel in her dreams is her mother. Almost made me cry, I don't know how her dad would have kept it together.

Just wanted to say good job. I'll try to come back and do a better review later today.

Keep up the good work!
~ Athalia
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