Query letter made:

"Invalid Entry" 

I don't know if it is any good, but it was quite an experience making it. In fact, to keep it on a single page as it is recommended, I had to delete half of it - which is really too bad because I think at 2 pages it was really good, and gave a good sense to the story. I understand that you aren't supposed to give away the whole plot in a query letter as a hook, but I didn't. The story is complex (welcome to my life) and what I ended up with really only indicates what the first quarter of the story is about.

So, those of your who have gotten any nibbles with your query letters, is just one page the way to go?