Well done on the dialogue 500 entry! I thought your scene flowed very smoothly and naturally . I just wanted to let you know that, at least on my phone, the italics in your entry weren't italicized- they had <> instead of {}. Just thought you should know... It distracts a little from the great thing you've got going on and I'd hate for you to be docked in the judging because of something small like that

~ Athalia