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Oct 10, 2014 at 8:26pm
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Even with that information, I think I'd still rather see the wife's scene first. We open with the unknown: Did he make it? We switch to husband and think, ooh, maybe he does make it! And then you leave us hanging again... Cheers, Michelle |
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