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A couple suggestions:

1. Consider putting your story in your portfolio so that more people can read it and write reviews. WDC is great for getting reviews of your work! To get to your portfolio, click on your name in the upper-left-hand corner of your screen, just underneath of the logo "WRITING.COM". Then click "Create Item" at the top of the screen, and choose "Static Item". Enter your title, a brief description, and the story, and adjust the other settings. Then click "Save and View".

2. Because indents are ignored when you enter text into a web browser, it's hard to read your story. We have found that if you put a space between your paragraphs, it's easier to read.

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Michelle