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Oct 21, 2015 at 6:59pm
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Her voice rose above the rest like a dove busting free from its cage; each note a shining bell amidst the clang of common pots. That's a bit more wordy, but I think it draws a picture of she sang beautifully pretty well. Thank you, ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** "I try to create sympathy for my characters, then turn the monsters loose." -Stephen King |
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