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Oct 3, 2016 at 2:06pm
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Re: Re: Need writing buddy & Antagonist Intro problem
*Smile* It's funny as I was waiting for an answer I think I figured it out. But some suggestions would still be welcome.

The problem is my main character has is that she is ostracized for knowing how to unite two separate races, her own (elves) and humans. However there's a law against elves even letting humans know they exist. And when she's thrown out of Elven society, the dragons which live with them also leave (the elves). And the younger set of elves cause a civil war.

So, her struggle begins that she must find a way for elves and humans to come together and put the civil war to rest.

Part of her knowledge comes from the Earth itself. When she's ostracized from her home, the rest of her knowledge comes from living in the human society. But the main antagonist is Earth, because it has appointed her as a Guardian (there are a lot of adventures because of it) and the Earth was the one who gave her the knowledge of uniting races in the first place because it was tired of all the wars and wants peace on its lands and seas.

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