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Oct 12, 2016 at 4:47pm
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Help please!
by Noyoki
Hi,

For today's brain storming session I decided to tackle the religion one of my species worships, and I was hoping someone can take a peak at it and let me know what they think. Does it sound reasonable? Is there anything I can do to make it better? Also what other things do you think I should add for how they worship?

And don't mind the stuff after the **** that's just rambling when I ran out of ideas about the religion. Thank you for your thoughts!

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Help please!
· 10-12-16 4:47pm
by Noyoki
Re: Help please! · 10-12-16 4:57pm
by Sharon.NJ
Re: Re: Help please! · 10-12-16 5:08pm
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Re: Help please! · 10-12-16 7:24pm
by Kalistra
Re: Re: Help please! · 10-12-16 8:38pm
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Re: Re: Help please! · 10-13-16 12:27pm
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Re: Re: Help please! · 10-13-16 12:37pm
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Re: Re: Re: Help please! · 10-14-16 2:39am
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