After looking at what I have written for this outline I find I'm way to detailed. I get so involved with the story I never finish the outline to the end. I do know how it will end. Everyone is happy and the truth is revealed. The people change and love wins in the end.
Its getting there that'is the problem. I need more conflict. Things that will get people to turn the page.
Since my book has had reviews of "I couldn't put it down once I got into i,t" I'm afraid this one will be too predictable. Its a similar story. Like old Harlequins; the format is simple but the characters and conflicts are what keep readers buying them.
I want people to want the process. They want to be on the edge of their seat what is going to happen next? What juicy truth is going to be revealed?


          Tina