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Oct 19, 2016 at 12:12pm
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These are all great suggestions that will make my story more real and interesting. I don't want it filled with her "isms" but since this was traumatic and recent, she is thinking this place to be a haven. She has to decide to deal with her issues to find the truth. As she is incognito at first, Josh, and Mr.? will make mistakes in handling her. later as both begin to recognize her traits, some one leaks her where abouts. This brings press, but also the newly escaped kidnapper. Now what is she going to do?
Luckily the read gets a break to find out other things are working to bring the truth out and the deed of the past will meet the result of the present and Addy will come to depend on Josh and the PTSD group meetings.

sound OK?
I appreciate all your input! Anything else you think of will be a blessing.

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