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Oct 1, 2017 at 6:28pm
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Re: On behalf of LinnAnn - advice, please
Hmmm . . . LinnAnn -book writer ,

First, I would ask yourself why the scene is needed in the first place. I don't know the whole plot, story, or anything here.

From my limited viewpoint, it looks like it might be a key moment to your story.

If that's true, I would recommend at least changing to another chapter if you make a drastic POV change.

Of course, you are free to do anything you want with your story.

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On behalf of LinnAnn - advice, please · 10-01-17 5:19pm
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