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Oct 1, 2017 at 6:28pm
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Hmmm . . . LinnAnn -Book writer , First, I would ask yourself why the scene is needed in the first place. I don't know the whole plot, story, or anything here. From my limited viewpoint, it looks like it might be a key moment to your story. If that's true, I would recommend at least changing to another chapter if you make a drastic POV change. Of course, you are free to do anything you want with your story. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** |
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On behalf of LinnAnn - advice, please · 10-01-17 5:19pm
by Brandiwynš¶