No, it doesn't. I identify this poem as a free verse. Unfortunately, there are many reviewers who do not understand the concept of non-rhyming poetry. They are accustomed to rhyme and certain form. Those geese are a thing to see! Lovely in flight.

There will always be reviews that don't settle well with us. Let it just roll off your shoulders. I'm sure you will receive more reviews that are better in understanding the free verse concept.