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BrandiwynšŸŽ¶ , also known as Michelle Tuesday, is a musician, educator and writer hailing from Columbus, Ohio.
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Oct 24, 2017 at 8:06am
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Re: Re: Re: Minor Conflict
I haven't read the Lino yet, and I will when I'm done wading through the forum, but off the top of my head, to piggyback on Storm's idea... is there some action-driven thing, some tragedy or near-tragedy or horrible event, in which the "allies" must come to the aid of one another, console one another, etc... some external influence... the point being that we think these "allies" are the best of friends, always there for one another. Then the later betrayal will be that much more hurtful.

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Michelle

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Minor Conflict · 10-23-17 10:17pm
by Sarah Rae
Re: Minor Conflict · 10-23-17 10:46pm
by Storm Machine
Re: Re: Minor Conflict · 10-23-17 11:09pm
by Sarah Rae
Re: Re: Re: Minor Conflict · 10-23-17 11:12pm
by Storm Machine
Re: Re: Re: Re: Minor Conflict · 10-24-17 1:41am
by Elycia Lee ā˜®
*Exclaim*Re: Re: Re: Minor Conflict · 10-24-17 8:06am
by BrandiwynšŸŽ¶
Re: Re: Re: Re: Minor Conflict · 10-24-17 8:30am
by Sarah Rae
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Minor Conflict · 10-24-17 8:52am
by BrandiwynšŸŽ¶
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Minor Conflict · 10-24-17 8:59am
by Storm Machine
Re: Minor Conflict · 10-23-17 10:59pm
by BrandiwynšŸŽ¶
Re: Re: Minor Conflict · 10-23-17 11:03pm
by Sarah Rae
Re: Minor Conflict · 10-24-17 1:58am
by Anders J. Miller-Go Big Red!

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