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Oct 10, 2018 at 4:22am
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Re: Should I complete this backstory short?
I agree with Storm Machine , it's helpful to you in the long run if you finish. My first question was 'how are Sebastian and Oscar similar in age if they're brothers? Do they have different mothers, or are they are a year or so apart and the other siblings further apart in age?' My second question was 'Why didn't Sebastian already know that Oscar doesn't like crowds? Is this their first big occasion?'

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Should I complete this backstory short? · 10-08-18 9:07am
by Howler of the Moon
Re: Should I complete this backstory short? · 10-08-18 9:20am
by Storm Machine
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