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Oct 25, 2018 at 4:12am
#3225094
I know that these third Outlines that I have just updated on the Assignment Log not too long ago aren't very good, but that's not why I am asking this question. I'm asking it because I have a feeling that something is wrong with them. Especially, the Jessica Strong one. Is it because I am being too vague about it? Do I need to be more straight-forward about GorVon is doing there or why Carl is training Jessica to protect herself? Maybe it's something else. I sure would appreciate it if you can tell me what I am doing wrong. |
