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Oct 3, 2019 at 3:57pm
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I read it and you have a great start! You have a lot of ideas and thoughts to develop the characters going forward, and you only add to it as you go, fleshing them out to become more realistic. Great job! |
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You can tell that I am a novice at this: · 10-02-19 8:59pm
by Chrys O'Shea
Re: You can tell that I am a novice at this: · 10-02-19 9:02pm
by Sharon.NJ
Re: Re: You can tell that I am a novice at this: · 10-02-19 9:28pm
by Chrys O'Shea
Re: You can tell that I am a novice at this: · 10-03-19 12:27pm
by Storm Machine
Re: Re: You can tell that I am a novice at this: · 10-03-19 5:56pm
by Chrys O'Shea