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Oct 5, 2019 at 12:17pm
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Hi, I just need an opinion
About my story. When I first started with this story, I was going to have my character be an ADA with DID and go after the MS-13 gang out of revenge. That was my original idea. As I do the assignments; I see her changing right before my eyes and can feel her tugging me in a completely different direction. I seem to be capturing a lot of the living hell of her childhood past and instead of having DID; she has "made up" an imaginary friend or self and given her a name and hides all her true emotions in her. She escapes from her mother and lives a brief life on the streets under her imaginary friends name as a teen who becomes focused and still becomes an ADA with a goal to bring down this gang out of revenge until she meets this sheriff guy and she faces new choices in her life.

I know this kind of vague, and I wish that you could read my mind. I was wondering if it be a good idea to tackle this story and break it into 3 parts? Her childhood and escape, her life on the streets and her adulthood with the good an bad decisions and consequences that she makes and has to deal with?

Kristina
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