How does this sound?

Marcus is an 8-year-old boy who just lost his mother and 2-year-old baby sister. He has silver eyes and long dark hair, His hair is kept in a ponytail going all the way to his waist. He stands 4'5" and weighs 56 lbs. He has an olive skin tone with a slight blue tint to it. He feels like something is being kept from him though since his father is in quintine, he figures it is that. Or that his Blood Guardian just doesn't think he is old enough to deal with the unrest that plagues his beloved country.