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Oct 17, 2021 at 1:12pm
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Good job, Rookie. What's great about the story is that you don't feel that Guy's gonna be the antagonist. I just felt so sorry for the poor chap: losing his parents, the unresolved father issue, his try to be true to their last wishes, him being slowly led astray... him being the shining knight for the girl. (Yeah, I know I'm such a sappy romantic. It would be a pity to see Anakin turn into Darth for sure. If you're curious, here's mine:"Second Chance ("Antagonist" Background Story)" Can you find the antagonist? |
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