I've written worse, for sure. But I don't know. I just didn't come out like I wanted. But I suppose that the audience is equally important. And if you publish, the audience is probably more important. lol Who cares if you hate it if you've made a million dollars off of it.

Thanks for the encouragement. I think I just had this idea in my head and couldn't get it out the way I wanted. But I'm glad that for someone who can't see inside my head, it's a good story.