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Oct 1, 2023 at 8:42pm
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Sounds fine. It's straight forward, follows some popular but not cliched tropes, and has a very clear protag. I am assuming, of course, that his wife was a victim of this same serial killer, and he works this out, so it becomes personal, which clouds his judgement... that sort of thing? But it sounds like a story that could work quite well. |
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Help- I need an Opinion · 10-01-23 8:32pm
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