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Oct 10, 2023 at 7:43pm
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While investigating the suspicious death of Sinclair Banks, a successful vintner, Daved Wolfe, a Private Investigator, just wants to stop this vengeful killer from killing again, but when he starts targeting his loved ones, a game of catch or be killed ensues.

How about:

While investigating the suspicious death of successful vintner Sinclair Banks, Daved Wolfe, a Private Investigator, just wants to stop this vengeful killer from killing again, but when the killer starts targeting Wolfe's loved ones, a game of catch or be killed ensues.

Does that clarify things?
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