Ms. Nobody’s Home ,

Yes, the scene works. It was actually a nice continuation to your original short.

I really liked the tension between the Lady and Tamsin, and Tamsin's own inner conflict. And Ripper is a typical cat. Don't tell me otherwise. And you really have a knack for painting vivid settings – I felt like I was the fly on the wall watching the ceremony and the women's battle of the wits.

You didn't review "Christmas Lights " , but I'm humbled it stirred you up a bit. It was my first try at erotica.

Only a day left, eh?

Happy Writing, Ma'am.