Hello Jeff  ,
My Thoughts:
In this story you were able to give us something we rarely ever see. Some idea of what happened after the fairytale couple ride off into the sunset. Since half of all marriage ends in divorce, it is reasonable to think that at least some of those happily ever afters didn't last.
My Favorite Part:
I like how this looks at the idea unfairness in divorce while still remaining humorous. The fact that a woman, or man, can marry someone who's far richer than they, and then expect to remain living in the way they're used to after the divorce is unfair. It is a very sticky subject with pros and cons on both sides, but you were able to explore it without getting bogged down in the debate.
My Suggestions:
It would have been interesting to see a little blip, an update of six months or so, showing where each ended up.
Thank you,
~Noyoki
Write On!!
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 You responded to this review 02/15/2013 @ 1:56pm EST |
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