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Is he up to the challenge? (100 Words No-Repeats Contest Entry)
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(Disclaimer: any opinions are strictly my own, to do with as you will. Keep what you find helpful, toss the rest with yesterday's paper)

Reads like a slightly more verbose Hemmingway

I love the amount of stress you manage to develop and portray over the course of a scant hundred non-repeating (!) words. The use of elipses in this train-of-thought-type narrative is very effective, even to the point that I would have liked to have seen one more, after 'Almost finished now'

If you choose to treat this as a wip, I would suggest replacing 'another' with 'final', to further heighten the stress level, but be true to your muse.

I hope big rewards did follow for you. This is a truly challenging form, and you created an exceptional piece.

I have noted no errors.

Thankyou for another well-written work. Write On!

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