Hi
Princess Megan Snow Rose ,
This review is a part of "
Game of Thrones"
[
13+].
Overall Impression:
As a person who is owned by two black cats, I was very interested in reading this Newsletter. I know that some people see black cats as a bad omen, as evil and so on, which is indeed very silly. Did you know that in this modern day black cats are less likely to be adopted because people think they don't look so nice in selfies? That's very sad, isn't it?
Your Newsletter has a lot of interesting information, for example where black cats are seen as good luck and where they are seen as bad luck. I like all the history that you give. You have done quite a bit of research!
I also like the images you have added to your Newsletter - they offer a nice visual aspect.
All in all, I found this to be an enjoyable read.
Suggestions:
I do have a couple of suggestions, dear author. I hope that you will find them helpful!
Paragraph 12:
Varanda
Little typo - this should be "
veranda".
Paragraph 13:
One night, Roger outside and a stripped cat came along and walked up to him.
Maybe -
One night, Roger was outside and a striped cat came along and walked up to him.
My Rating:
I really enjoyed this Newsletter. It contains a lot of interesting information.
I did have a couple of suggestions, but nothing major. So, I will give this item a rating of 4.5 out of 5.
Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!
Kit
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .