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Wink and a hug

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Prompt : A world where money doesn't exist and people pay with social contact.
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Review of Wink and a hug

Review by dblameck (David)

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Rated: 13+

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Review of Wink and a Hug

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the contest of the Game of Thrones.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Would the world be a better place if we paid our bills with a a little affection or kindness? I think it just might and this story gives us a glimpse of that society.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

A man, Mr Dyer, pays for a coffee and a newspaper with a smile, a handshake and a wink. He sees a woman paying for a taxi fare with a very ammorus kiss. He wants to take the taxi and he flirts with the woman. It is an interesting scene and I quite enjoyed the concept.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

This was a great idea.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

keep writing and sharing with all of us.

dblameck

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