Hi
GERVIC ,
I love your take on the prompt. The narrative reminds me of The Purge films, with people running around in costumes killing and maiming.
The poem kept me reading from start to end. I particularly liked the closing stanza. The reader gets swept along in the horror and violence of Bunnie and Bonnie, but you provide the reader with a way to stay safe, just like in The Purge.
Thank you for sharing this item! Please keep on writing!
Andy~hating university
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