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Perpetual Ruminations [13+] My thoughts released; a mind set free |
Review of Perpetual Ruminations
Review by 🎄pwheeler jo...
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello tj-Merry Mischief Maker ! I enjoy your blog posts and often read them, even if I rarely comment and I don't know that I've ever done a review before? But Gaby has this new "review your reviewer" challenge and YOU are the first one I picked for it! I hope this thank you review is encouraging to you and that you find the review uplifting. INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW: This is one of your blog posts that drive me to leave a comment ("Wow, what a day! And that surprise visit. Melted my heart. ) and that comment is still true. You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done! MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK: This part of your opening sentence made me smile: "Today started with a lot of time to do what ever I decided I'd like to do, which was a lot of nothing." I personally think coming to Writing.Com to play (err, write) is something worthwhile. Though I do try to wait until I have my other goals complete or until later in the afternoon at least. If I log in here first thing, I might never get anything else done lol. But you have a lot of family and I'm sure they pull you away from your computer or phone. Kudos to you for taking it easy after your trip! Our bodies need recovery time. Well done! How wonderful that you got to visit with your visiting granddaughter while you were visiting with one of your stepdaughters! That's a lovely account of serendipity. So glad you didn't have any problems on your way home, despite the heavy fog. Again, I was really happy about your surprise company! What a lovely reunion surprise and I'm so glad she apologized and you were reunited and can get a fresh start. Forgiveness is a beautiful thing. I imagine it meant even more to her than it did to you, which sounds like a lot and my heart rejoices for you all. I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your blog post. Well done! Your blog post was interesting to me, felt like it was coming straight from your heart and brain, and made me want to read your next one. Well done! IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER: I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's perfect as it is. Well done! CONCLUSION: You have a great writing style and sense of humor and I enjoy reading your blog posts and other writings. Well done! Thank you for sharing your time, heart, community spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community! May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance! PWheeler My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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