About This Author
A changeling spirit,
constantly evolving,
revolving around an inner core,
spinning forth legend and lore,
stories and lives
as I come to grips
with who and what I am,
have been and may be.
I am a phoenix:
rising ever above and beyond!
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 It's just a pebble ... but ...  [E]
The things we keep
by fyn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and happy account anniversary!

You have a portfolio packed with poetry, and I hope to spend some time this month browsing through. I love your simple and charming writing style, it looks to be right up my alley.

I’ve always loved stones and rocks, though not as much as my mom, who always dreamed of being a jewelry designer and working with gemstones. As a child I had a huge collection of rocks of all kinds, and as you observe, they all had stories behind them. There were big anomalous black granite chunks snitched from the graveled grounds of a local nursery, sparkling white and pink quartz picked up from the sweepings at the Lowe’s, ancient clay streaked stones with fern leaf fossils embedded in them from our own backyard, and endless varieties of oddly shaped ones that looked like sponges or bread or other weird things.

Your writing is clear and shares the point well. Nicely formatted and easy to read.

Thanks for sharing, take care, and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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