Review of It's Michigan

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Review of It's Michigan

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Rated: E

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Greetings and happy accidents anniversary!

What a chilly and perfectly concentrated poem. Every word builds that feeling of bleak, sharp cold, from the scattered pine boughs to the hapless squirrel. I’m shivering

Perhaps a separate section showing what happens when the weather warms up by the end of the day and starts turning mushy and slushy would be a nice addition.

Other than that I don’t have any suggestions. This is well written and memorable.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing

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