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Positives
"The Road Less Traveled" by Robert Frost is one of my all-time favorite poems, so the fact that this piece both alludes to it and mirrors some of its structure was a real delight for me personally.
Suggestions
I don't have any specific suggestions for improvement; this piece was a delight to read just as it is.
Overall
I thought you did a wonderful job with this poem. It was just the right blend of familiar/reminiscent of Frost's original, with a unique/modern twist of your own. Wonderful job!
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Jeff 
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