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 Walking with Mr. Frost Open in new Window. [E]
Yes, I met him as a young girl...
by Fyn Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Fyn

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*Penw* Positives

"The Road Less Traveled" by Robert Frost is one of my all-time favorite poems, so the fact that this piece both alludes to it and mirrors some of its structure was a real delight for me personally.


*Penw* Suggestions

I don't have any specific suggestions for improvement; this piece was a delight to read just as it is.


*Penw* Overall

I thought you did a wonderful job with this poem. It was just the right blend of familiar/reminiscent of Frost's original, with a unique/modern twist of your own. Wonderful job!


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