An Angel Army Review
Hi Max Griffin 🏳️🌈  which I found on the Read & Review feature.
I'm JACE  , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Comments on "The Master""  .
I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.
 Overall Impression. I noted you wrote your review of "The Master" in 2012. Somehow I missed this movie showing in theaters. (Though, in fairness, I was undergoing a divorce and moving on with life and work at that time--no time for the finer things in life for me.)
Your review piqued my interest. I will try to find it on a streaming service, although this is not a movie my current wife will find interesting or watch with me.
Perhaps it's the movie subject, but I found your writing to be rather intense. Phrasing like: That's one reason the movie is painful: it's so real. Its reality pierces your soul like the fangs of a venomous, psychic serpent. Please don't get me wrong--I find your style to be both honest and captivating. I wanted to read more.
You remind me of a very good friend, a retired History teacher, who frequently attends new movies showing and provides in-depth, frank reviews on Facebook. I look forward to reading his take.
Frankly, I think it rather scary how much Dodd's principles (if that's what they really are) mirror what's happening today.
 Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.
 I found no issues to mention here.
 My Rating. Rating not requested; none provided.
 Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.
 You responded to this review 03/14/2024 @ 10:41am EDT |
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