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Kalamity

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It was the first of its kind; a promise of the future.
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Rated: 13+

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Happy Birthday Greetings

Oh dear, this was a painful one to read. I was hoping there would be some hope for survival, but it was a hopeless endeavor. If Edmund had only listened to Sarah…

Which reminds me, if this was set in the usual Victorian steampunk era, the two of them wouldn’t have been sleeping in the same bed while engaged. Just a small thought from a fussbudget.

Your showing details are all too vivid, bringing the scenes to life with the clarity of a movie. It’s grimly realistic in that tragic accidents of the sort do actually happen even nowadays.(have you heard about the people who dived down to see the Titanic?)

This is a cautionary tale of sorts, reminding one of the fragile hubris of mankind and the great risks that are involved in any technological advances. One wonders if we weren’t all better off living a quiet agrarian lifestyle…

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing