Review of Tommy's Rainbow

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Tommy's Rainbow

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Little Tommy's lost and his only way home lies in a magical rainbow.
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Review of Tommy's Rainbow

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Rated: E

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Happy Birthday Greetings!

Ah, now here’s a story that’s perfect for the day; heartfelt and ultimately happy as Tommy learns his lesson on love and obedience. I like nothing better than good children’s stories, and you’ve made a charming one here. Those seven rainbow fairies with their lovely voices - why, it could be a Disney movie.

The font’s a bit small on this one; I always recommend Size 4 Verdana around here. Other than that, there isn’t anything I can see to change. Descriptions are warmly visual, and we can see and feel everything quite well. The backdrop of wartime adds a historical feel and some depth to the fairytale.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing