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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Creeper Of The Realm

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Hi Leger, I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

Title: Up, Up and Away

First Impression: I have been curious about air balloons so this caught my eye and I decided to read this. I enjoy romance and wanted to read a romance as well as pretending that I am in an air balloon. I am here going to read this.

What needs your attention: A Man who was mean falls out of the balloon and is now deceased. I hope they didn't leave him there. It was an accident. This is an interesting twist to the story.

What part I liked best: Leo seems like a bad guy and picks on Leeann. She dropped the camera. After Leo falls over the side, the story seems to have a happy ending. Every story needs some excitement. I like the description of the scenery. The dialogue is suitable.

Overall Impression: The woman and her husband seem happy and the balloon ride and trip seem to work for them. The characters are interesting and well structured. Some good drama and suspense. A good style and I like the scenery. Looks like you spent time with this.

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