Princess Megan has an Associates Of Art Degree in Journalism and diplomas in Free Lance Writing and Short Story Writing. I have 2 published novels: Passage To Romance and Princess Of Scruples. I work as a Qualified Medication Assistant in mental health. I am married and have a striped gray cat named Tigger. I am a Moderator at Writing.com I am also a Creative Scrapbook Designer and writing is my passion. Check out my stories in my Port.
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Given: Apr 8, 2024 at 8:17am
Length: 1,657 Characters |
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Greetings, Princess Megan Rose! I am reviewing this because I discovered it on Read & Review.
First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.
What I Liked
I loved your honesty and imagination! I'd forgotten all about that Glen Campbell song--Dreams of the Everyday Housewife. I think I'll look it up on my laptop and play it. I see you wrote this in your forties, about twenty years ago. We must be close to the same age. I definitely connect with the names you mentioned.
This is so true: We all love to daydream. For those of us who write romance and fictional, you have to use your imagination. I like this because as writers, we put ourselves in our characters' shoes.
Suggestions/Comments to Consider
Paragraph 4: It gets through me housework.I wonder if you just accidently switched your words around? It gets me through housework.
Other than that little hiccup, it all looks great!
Final Thoughts
Sounds to me like you have a happy life, imagination and all! I enjoyed the read.
Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")