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My name is Joy, and I love to write. Why poetry, here? Because poetry uplifts its writer, and if she is lucky enough, her readers, too. Around us, so many objects abound to write about. Once a poet starts with a smallest, most trivial object, he shall discover that his pen will spill out what is most delicate or most majestic hidden inside him. Since the classics sometimes dealt with lofty subjects with a lofty language, a person with poetry in his soul may incline to emulate that. That is understandable. Poetry does that to a person: it enlarges the soul and gives it wings. Yet, to really soar, a poet needs to take off from the ground. Kiya's gift. I love it!
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 Date with a Proctologist Open in new Window. [ASR]
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, ! I am reviewing this because I discovered this on Read & Review. *Smile*

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*Tulipo* What I Liked


         *Bulletv* What an adorable little story! *Heart*

         *Bulletg* Okay, so I had to look up proctologist. *Blush* So I learned something new today. *Wink*

         *Bulletp* This is well-written and kept my interest. Your characters (especially Max) were well-rounded, feeling like normal, everyday real people.


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         I found no typos whatsoever. *Smile*

         My only stumbling block is... Hadn't Max and Laura exchanged several phone conversations previous to the business seminar? So when Clarice (aka Laura) says, "Let me get your phone number and I’ll call you after my daughter leaves.” Wouldn't his phone number seem familiar to her? Just curious. *Wink*


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts


         I really enjoyed this!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
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